Writing a good introduction is important. Of course you don't want ot bore your readers. So you need to think of a good intro like: The past should be left alone because it no longer exists. Yet, it is good that I still own my memories. Things I want to engrave, or the things I want to forget, will leave traces in my minds. Sometimes recollection is a joy. Memory is like putting together the puzzle pieces of previous experiences. I believe memory is the core of the soul — like the bulb in the light, without it the light cannot shine.This intro. is good because it has a good not boring beginning and has good details unlike this: I'm going to tell you why the past is the past. I think it is because...
That would be very boring! This intro. doesn't have any good ddetails and is short and it could be better like the other one.
Wow! Your 20 things I am thankful for is really heart-warming and inspiring. When I was done reading it I felt like writing something that! Even my dad thought it was great!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! : )