A man named Jake sees ghosts. He's worried so he checks himself into a mental institution. Not relizing that the institution has been closed for thirty years. Jake isn't the only one in the building though. Someone is watching him walk in the strange old institution and wondering why anyonee would want to go in there. He walked in and saw all of these people. He asked one of the stange figures "Please stop. I need to know what wrong with me, I've been seing dead people. Not like in a grave ghosts aren't real. How could I.. come on people stop walking away from me." He attemped to stop a person. She walked right through him. He walks out of the building and thought he needed to do it another day. He was waiting and wondering how could that person walk through him and waiting for the next day to come. Jake went to bed talking to himself. He saw glimpses of people in his house. He knew it couldn't have been ghosts because there can't be ghosts and he didn't believe in spirits or ghosts. The only explanation was being mental. He woke up. This time he went early. He walked in and it was completely dead. As in no one there. It was silent. The girl that was watching him last night asked him, "Why were you in that place last night. It's been shut down for at least thirty years now."
"I went in there and there was people. they were wlaking and talking amongts themselves. I hope i wasn't seeing things. Again" He was agrivated.
"I can help you." She said."I see ghosts to. My dog can help. He is great with them. Sometimes he opens up right away to dog loving ghosts." They walked to see the little girls' dog.
"Hi," the dog greerted him. He sensed that he knew about Lisa being able to see ghosts and also knowing that he could.
"How is that dog talking?" He asked Lisa.
"He just can." Lisa responded. "It's a long story. Sorry I didn't mean to snap" Jake stood silent. They all waited until it was atleast tewlve to go back into the facility. It was around that time and they all saw the people again.
"This is the world of the ded... Just kidding. The story to this is that it got shut down a long time ago and everyone dided that worked here, or died here." They walked. A ghost talked to them. Jake jumped. They all tried helping there unfinished work. They tried and tried. The ghosts didn't want to do anyhting. I think they wanted to be here. It was there happy place when no one made fun of them or no one to bother them. Lisa helped Jake with his problem and he lived great.
I really liked reading this! the whole story is very interesting and you described everything so well!
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